Score: 1

"More Constructive Criticism"

submission: Mountains' Flowers

date: August 25, 2009

Ok, despite how much this song makes my ears bleed. The previous reviewer is simply throwing insults towards someone who put forth effort to create this song.

K, Jakob. This piece needs work. It suffers from a lack of variety, has no definable structure or dimension to it, and would be found lacking even by House techno standards. Switch things up more. Giving the listener something more to listen to than a repeated recording of 'Yes' and a monotonous background melody. Put a melody in there, insert some enthusiasm, and maybe give each sound you put in there a spotlight at some point or another.

Do this and you'll at least see something better. I can't guarantee that it'll get better than a 2 or 3 rating, but it will be better than this.

Score: 9

"Nice"

submission: NightCall

date: August 25, 2009

Even with the beat, I think this one would be better labeled as an Ambient song. But I like it. Good work on a very atmospheric piece.

Score: 4

"Pretty good until..."

submission: It'll Be Okay

date: August 25, 2009

I thought it was rather nice. Nice and soothing. Right until the end when I heard the static. It doesn't fit the song, and makes my ears hurt. If you're looking to remind the listener of an astronaut in space, use a deeper, gentler kind of static that's more reminiscent of that steady crackle we would hear in NASA communications or the like.